Dreadful Fear (Triolet?)
Fear is a dreadful thing, indeed!It can steal away your esteemHear me please, I wouldn't mislead!Fear is a dreadful thing, indeed!It doesn't want you to succeed,to stop you it will surely...
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All lines in a triolet must have exactly the same meter."Hear me, I wouldn't mislead!"--This line has only 7 syllables instead of the 8 required by the other lines.Howard
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again .... I leave the comments on form up to jason ... but certainly the problem he's pointed out is an easy enough one to address ... the addition of something as simple as the word "please" would...
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Thanks! I'll edit it and thanks for the help with 'please' Mona
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Nice to see people trying these more complex forms...and this looks good to me! Every new beginning comes from some other beginnings end...Why not try a new beginning...at The Maelstrom
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